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What would you do for your friends?
Would you go to the other side of the world for them or,
Would you just watch as they walked away,
Would you live for them keeping there memory alive or,
Fade away and let them slip into the blackness,
Would you fight to keep them or,
just crumble and give up.
Would you go to the other side of the world for them or,
Would you just watch as they walked away,
Would you live for them keeping there memory alive or,
Fade away and let them slip into the blackness,
Would you fight to keep them or,
just crumble and give up.
Literature
The King who wore the Obsidian Crown
There once was a King who wore an obsidian crown,
His mistress was cold and she wore an obsidian gown,
His body was cold and his face was cursed by a perpetual frown,
His skin was pale and his eyes always stared down....
---Ancient fable and song told and sung since the Dawn of Ages
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Friends are the best to have when you do not have a family to lean on. My closest friends that I have gone to school with since kindergarten, are now online with me. This has helped me to feel better, if we ever get separated, I will be able to still get in contact with them. These guys are my family ever since I had lost my parents.
Thank you guys for always being there for me.
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Best Friends Forever
We have been friends for ages
And it only seems like a day
You are one of the people I love
You have helped me in so many ways
You gave me the courage I needed
When I couldn't handle it
Our value our friendship
You've never gambled it
We both have never taken our friendship
For granted
It's beautiful, sweet and unique
I am so glad we have met
Although we have shared many laughs
And a lot of more serious stuff
We talk about life, and the people in it
To Atomic Catty and Hiza Duff
I value everything you say
And respects your opinions
Our life isn't just plain
It's like a kazillion dimensions
For the people on the outside
Lo
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